Talk:The Uninvited/@comment-1993678-20130212205216

this story has a strange blend of comedy, dark imagery and surrealism.. it's interesting to read.. the only thing I suggest is changing the title, Worry is anything but unseen.. maybe name it something like:

"The Trouble With Worry" (okay, that's a bad one.. tried a play on "Trouble With Tribbles")

just my two-cents.