Talk:Genocide of a Peaceful Race/@comment-1615401-20111026010001

I think you could describe the village a little more in the beginning, give us a reason to feel sorry for these people, other than the obvious. I want to see that Jenny, Bob, and Dumbname were the ones dead, not nameless Pauci. Other than that, Vevette seemed to take the thing a little "well". Pretty good job, just needs a little expansion.