Talk:No Conscience/@comment-6732784-20130228165702/@comment-1441429-20130228170551

Fatal is erratic, and uses many different kinds of weapons. The death ray really is his most-used, signature weapon. Also, the drunken man wasn't poisoned, he drank himself to death. It was just alcohol poisoning.

I get what you're saying about the body parts, and I myself don't think that I thought that through completely. I may change it, I may not. I really want to move on to the next sections, though.

Also, perhaps you're right about the connection. Maybe some people should've been talking about the apartment complex that was attacked. But like I said, I want to move on. And, I was in a bit of a rush writing the first chapter, and may not have thought everything out clearly.

Thanks for the constructive criticism, and thanks for reading! I appreciate it! xD