Talk:The Traitor's Punishment/@comment-1119168-20111025225841/@comment-1070010-20111025230806

Despite the torture scene happening between demons in hell... I wanted to bring out the gritty realism of the process, if that makes any sense. It's not supposed to be pretty and it shouldn't be worded as such. In fact, if it was at least a little difficult to read but still came across as a cohesive and well-written story, then the story does it's job well. It's dark artistic expression, after all...