Talk:Shadow of Death - Uprising (Part 1)/@comment-1070010-20130830025115/@comment-2059440-20130830120115

to be honest that's not true at all, there is no such thing as "sloppy narrative structure" save for deliberate troll-stories.. there are some stories and authors that make narratives that are disjointed and chaotic (look at Eraserhead etc) - just harder to follow, not necessarily sloppy, if done correctly.

I think most people who contribute here knew that they should have separate scenes for events that occur in multiple areas - I believe it was just a suggestion in case people didn't know where to start, so far all the heroes are in the same city anyway.