Talk:The Runaway/@comment-3237716-20131216010623

sorry for taking so long.. forgot about this - are you alright with this story being less about action / conflict and more about Friend and Nebula interacting?

I'd like this story to kind of be about how Friend grows attracted to Nebula but his attitude kind of puts her off (as well as her commitment to Ruichi), yet he's more a "jerk" at worst in this story and not really a bad guy at all.

I'd like it to kind of be Friend's reckless, selfish sense of "fun" versus Nebula's own sense of "fun".

The sequel is when Friend gets darker and thus antagonistic (don't know if Nebula will be involved in that one or not)