Talk:No Conscience/@comment-6732784-20130228165702/@comment-6732784-20130228171536

If erraticisity is the case for the weapon choice, maybe him tinkering with the death-ray in the first part, maybe after killing the drunk guy, would of helped the reader prepare for that significant level of technology in the second part.

I've said this before to Edwin. In the context to the wiki: It makes complete sense. But as a stand alone thing? ... not really. Death-rays aren't a common thing just yet, ya' know? xD

And constructive critism is so helpful! :D

I noticed that when I was receiving critism, even if I didn't change my current installments, that my future writings improved... And I wasn't specifically trying to warp my story around the crititsm, just being aware of it helped a lot. All critism from me should be considered a compliment. It means I know you have the compacity to become a great writer. I wouldn't waste my time reading and writing otherwise. ;)