Talk:Crusader: Story 1/@comment-2059440-20120625173645

probably best not to capitalize the word "voice" (makes it seem as if The Voice is involved when you do) - as far as hateful depictions of religious extremism go it's still not as bad as Oath but I give warning: if you are worried about offending people "grim-dark" scenarios may not be the path you want to go down.. I know many of my stories offend people and I take that risk, however if you find yourself continually worrying if your stories will cause offence maybe it means you need to think on a new root (maybe more traditional superhero, maybe more comedic, maybe more traditional sci-fi..).